救灾报道中的不规范表达
<p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">说到救灾报道中的不规范表达，就不得不提一下8月8日晚的一篇百十来字的短讯。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">可谓不规范救灾报道的“活教材”。内容如下：</span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">原标题：九寨沟县武装部人员正快速赶往震中漳扎镇 震中通讯中断，离县城近60公里</strong></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">某报快讯 据西部战区消息，<span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">四川省军区政治部</span>主任张力表示，已命令九寨沟<span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">县武装部</span>政委张孝军率武装部人员快速赶往震中<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">--漳扎镇。目前，震中<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">通讯中断</span>，离县城近60公里，且人烟较少。</span></strong></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">129字，三处有问题。<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">下面咱们就分析一下：</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(172, 57, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">1.“四川省军区政治部”应为“四川省军区政治工作局”</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">军改中，原隶属于大军区的各省军区，改隶新成立的中央军委国防动员部领导，同时接受所处战区的联合指挥。<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">省军区机关由原来的司令部、政治部、后勤部、装备部等四大部，调整为办公室、政治工作局、战备建设局、国防动员局、</span><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">保障局等“一办四局”。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(172, 57, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">2.“县武装部”应为“县人民武装部”或“县人武部”</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">同类错情还有某报6月26日2版《抢险救灾 争分夺秒》文中：黑水县是距离叠溪镇最近的县城，县武装部一接到救灾命令，立即组织<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">70多名民兵赶往现场。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(172, 57, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">3.“通讯中断”应为“通信中断”</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">从当前来讲，“通讯”一词的使用范围已经很窄，一般与文稿相关。如：特约通讯员小李写了一篇人物通讯稿投给了xx通讯社。其他的一般使<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">用“通信”。如：量子通信、通信卫星、通信设施、通信兵等。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">同类错情还有某媒体发布的《甘肃省文县暴洪灾害造成7人死亡2人失联》文中：8月6日晚间至7日早晨，甘肃省陇南市文县天池镇、梨坪镇、舍书<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">乡出现局部强降水天气，引发暴洪泥石流灾害，部分村社房屋被冲毁，电力、通讯、道路中断。<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">（“通讯”应为“通信”）</span></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">我们再看看救灾报道的其他错情</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(172, 57, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">4.“直升飞机”应为“直升机”</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">某网8月9日《8人变9人，通过<span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">直升飞机</strong></span>转运的首批9名重伤员抵达成都》文中：9日19时38分，77集团军某陆航旅的4架<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">直升飞机</span></strong>降落成都<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">北郊某军用机场，通过<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">直升飞机</span></strong>从九寨沟震区转运的首批9名重伤员安全抵达成都。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">某报8月9日3版《向奋战在岫岩抢险救灾一线的民警、士兵致敬》文中：<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">直升飞机</span></strong>无法降落，舟桥部队无法架桥。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">从严格意义上讲，“直升机”和“飞机”是两种不同的航空器，从飞行原理上分，这是两种不同的航空器类型，它们产生升力和操纵力矩的方<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">式完全不一样。直升机不能称之为“直升飞机”，全国科学技术名词审定委员会审定公布的规范名词是“直升机”。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(172, 57, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">5.“晚21时19分”应为“21时19分”或“晚9时19分”</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">某网8月9日《Airbnb爱彼迎启动九寨沟地震应急机制》文中：8月8日<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">晚21时19分</span></strong>，四川省阿坝州九寨沟县发生7.0级地震。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">同类错情还有《春城晚报》8月9日《我省12位地震专家连夜赶赴四川》文中：截至8日晚21时30分，楚雄支队迅速集结11支地震救援分队和装<span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">备。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: -apple-system-font, 'Helvetica Neue', 'PingFang SC', 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">本文转载自“小张咬文嚼字”</p><p></p>
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